Introduction-Thesis Statement: Every person has his/her own characteristics, habits, behaviors, hobbies and interests. I have several interests which might be interesting for you such as being addicted to computer, being interested in politics and chess.
Body paragraph#1: I think I am an addicted person to computer since it entertains and teaches me very much.
A. I mostly use computer for fun by playing games.
B. Computer is a source of information for me thanks to internet connection.
C. It also allows me to create new images, videos and many other things that helps to develop my creativity.
Body paragraph#2: Politics is a very big part of our lives and it is very interesting to me.
A.I think everybody should think about social events and should be more sensible.
B.I am trying to clarify my political view via reading political books, articles and other people's opinions.
C.Moreover, voting for one party without having any political knowledge seems very ridiculous to me.
Body paragraph#3: Chess is one of the my favorite games and I like playing it very much.
A. In chess there is no factor of chance and this makes it very attractive.
B.Playing chess also develops one's logical skills
C.Decision-making skills also can be developed by playing chess and this can be transfered to real life.
Conclusion:These are the biggest parts of my life and I spend my time mostly with these things. They may not be such interesting things for you but I enjoy doing all of them.


You can write your essay as soon as possible. :) I just want to say that you should write your thesis statement a bit more specific and a bit detailed.
ReplyDelete"I have several interests which might be interesting for you such as being addicted to computer, being interested in politics and chess."
Why do you want to mention these issues?
And finally, correct the spelling mistake "habbit".